A poem as fragile as those petals through which life exudes 🙂
Thanks so much for your kind comments.
I feel a pleasing spaciousness and lightness in this piece.
Thanks, Ben! Glad you liked it 🙂
I should like to achieve a similar spaciousness, but that does not seem to be what comes to me
Ben, I have poets I really admire who write in ways I wish I ‘could.’ Or, more accurately, I have wished this more in the past. I’ve finally come to terms with the fact that my style is my style, and that certain people will like it and others, not so much. Which is fine with me, as I’ve no great writing career aspirations – I’ve always written and always will. As long as I find satisfaction in it, that’s what’s important – for Me. I can’t speak for another, but I do hope you know your writing is wonderful and uniquely ‘you.’ Cheers!
It seems we are in many important ways quite similar. 🙂 (No surprises there,)
And I thank you for your heartening words, while if anything that I post works for you then that can only be a bonus; I never post things that have not been approved by the prime censor. 🙂